Suggestions for Successors

First, you should write quickposts regularly. If you go out, you should a lot of pictures and atemp them on your blog. I think you can write trivial things. I often write about dishes which I ate on the day. Beyond that, I atemped the evening sun. You can write everything on your arround.

Second, you should use every classes effectively. If the teacher give a time, you shoul to make blog. On Typing Speed Trial, you should make goal and practice hard.

Finally, you should tidy your blog on port folios. If you can it, you find things your blog needs.

[102 words]

Typing

I often use a computer, recently. I almost type sentences in English but it is very difficult. I want to write over 150 words in 5 minutes in Typing Speed Trial but I can reach it so I practice typing. I have seen people who can type smoothly. I want to be the people someday. I need a lot of time to write on a computer so I sometimes don’t like it but it’s almost fun. I’m practicing it and I want to reach 150 words on the next test.

[90 words]

Portfolio

Student ID: 06144
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews




1
7
0
5
13


Blog posts


9
18
11
15
53


Words


1871
1947
670
533
5021


Sub-totals







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	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews			1	7	0	5	13
Blog posts			9	18	11	17	55
Words			1871	1947	670	533	5021
Sub-totals								---

(ote 3, below[.])

Fall Semester Essays

Essays	Short titles [+ links]	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Kumamoto	2007.10.10	15	897	3	0	15	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Favorite Place	2007.10.25	4	305	0	2	2	0
Movie review 07.11.11	Toy Story	2007.11.11	5	350	0	0	1	0
4th essay 07.11.25	Friends	2007.11.25	4	359	0	0	0	0
5th essay 07.12.09	TV	2007.12.09	4	209	0	1	0	1
6th essay 07.12.21	Computers	2007.12.20	0	112	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	32	2120	3	3	18	1	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ...
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	53	07.09.26
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	148	07.10.24
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)		---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	97

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	The Wrong Man	07.11.06	42
2-02	Mike's Lucky Day	07.11.06	20
2-03	Another World	07.11.06
2-04	American Life	07.11.06	33
2-05	Shooting Stars	07.11.06	34
2-06	Mystery Girl	07.11.28	7
2-07	Dinosaur's Day	07.11.28	17
2-08	MR BEAN	08.01.11	9
2-09	Diving Dolphin	08.01.11	12
2-10	I can SWIM!	08.01.11	4
2-11	LOST LOVE	08.01.11	3
2-12	E.T.	08.01.11	6
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	TOTALS:

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	o
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	o
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	o
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	o
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	o
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	o
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	o
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	o
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	o
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	o
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...
2. ...
3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

Book Review 2-12: E.T.

I like E.T. I was moved.

[6 words]

Book Review 2-11: LOST LOVE

It was moved.

[3 words]

Book Review 2-10: I can SWIM!

I became to swim.

[4 words]

Book Review 2-09: Diving Dolphin

It was easy to read for me. I could know about dolphins.

[12 words]

Book Review 2-08: MR BEAN

It was interesting. I have seen the move yet.

[9 words]

Nails

I asked my friend to make nails for Seijinshiki. She is learning makeup. I got them today. They were beautiful and cute. I'm put them the day after tomorrow.

[29 words]

Movie

I watched "Chary and Chocolate Factory" at night. It was a wonderful movie. I watched it in English. It was very difficult but if I could understand the mean, I was pleased. It was very interesting.

[36 words]

Chinsukou

My friends gave me Chinsukou. It was a souvenir from Okinawa from her boyfriend. I like it very much so I was glad to it. It was so good.

[29 words]

Rainy

It was rain today. I don't like rain because I get wet and it's cold. It was a bad day for me.

[22 words]

Practice

My mother practiced to dress my kimono for Seijinshiki. My mother is learning about dressing kimono so she is good at it. I wish it will success!!

[27 words]

Music Program

I watched music programs end of last year. My favorite musician is Kumi Koda. She is very cool and cute. I like her thinking very much. Her song's words are very good. I want to be like her.

[38 words]

Part-Time Job

I worked hard on the wintre vacation. I'm working at Daiso in Ogawa. I got a part. I'm taking charge of sports and health. I like sports so it is fun. But, I should order so it is difficuit the job. It is challenging for me. I want to do the work like clockwork.

[54 words]

Otoshidama

I got otoshidama on New Year's Day. I had thought I couldn't get it so I was very happy. I want to go to Kagoshima and Miyazaki on spring vacation.

[30 words]

Hawks

I like baseball. My favorite team is Softbank Hawks. I'm planning to go to a camp in Miyazaki with Megumi. I like Munerin. I want to see him. I'm looking forword to go there.

[34 words]

Shopping

I went shopping to prepare for Seijin-shiki. I bought a fur because it will be cold. I bought a white one. It's natural. I'm looking forword Seijin-shiki very much.

[29 words]

Lunch

This is stair frys made by my brother. He made it for his winter vacation's homeowrk. It was good.

[19 words]

Test

I had a register test on my part time job. I had to shout and smyle. It was difficult for me but I was glad to pass the test. I got new pinafore.

[33 words]

Snow

It was snowy on The New Year's Day. I wanted to see snow so I was happy. On the other hand, it was very cold. I don't like cold day.

[30 words]

New Year's Day

We payed a visit to a shrine on New Year's Day. The shrine name is Myoken Shrine. It was very crowded. I drew a fortune slip and got Daikichi. I'm lucky 2008. I was happy.

[35 words]

Cookie

My friend has a dog. His name is Cookie. He is very handsome. When I went to the shopping center with the friend, my friend bought his cloths. It was the cloths of bee. We dressed it for him. He became to be very cute. He was running in the house. He looked happy.

[54 words]